Friday, November 21, 2014

Can you hear me?

a poetic respond on "The Metaphor"

My teacher Miss Hancock,  can you hear me?
You are the flash light in my life,
that flashes up my heart
You are a candle that has a end,
when it burns out, i have to survive in the darkness independently, by myself.
You are the key to my future,
but sadly, I lost it.
You are not hear next to me anymore, because of me...
I am sorry Miss Hancock, can you hear me?


1 comment:

  1. good use of light imagery and comparisons for Miss Hancock

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